虽然我年纪还小,但当我在以后面对人生的荣辱时,我会对自己说:“荣,江山依旧,风采犹然,恰沧海巫山,熟视岁月如流,浮华万千,不屑过眼烟云;辱,胯下韩信,雪底苍松,宛若羽化之仙,知退一步,海阔天空,不肯因噎废食。”……
Although I am still young, when I face the honor and disgrace of life in the future, I will say to myself: "glory, the river and the mountain are still beautiful, just like the sea and the Wushan, familiar with the age and the moon, flashy, and disdainful of the past; disgrace, the crotch of Hanxin, the snow base of Cangsong, just like the immortal of emergence, knowing to step back, the sea and the sky are wide, and not willing to stop eating because of choking."
这一句句常挂在嘴边的话,时时激励着我,督促着我,将我的人生勾划出一道绚丽的色彩。这些话,要常挂在嘴边,永远不会忘记。
This sentence often hangs in the mouth, always inspires me, urges me, outlines a brilliant color of my life. These words should always be said and never forgotten.
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内容基本符合题意,语言表达也清楚无误。首尾的扣合衔接自然,段落层次安排比较均匀。但不足有三:
The content is basically consistent with the meaning of the question, and the language expression is clear. The connection between the head and the tail is natural, and the arrangement of paragraphs is relatively uniform. But there are three deficiencies:
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