In this paper, the examinee chooses the clue "loneliness" as the main purpose of his article, which saves the trouble of examination and avoids the partial questions. It can be seen that the examinee's examination room has high adaptability. Profound intention and clear organization are the biggest characteristics of this paper. At the beginning of the article, the poem laments the loneliness, and extends the "mistiness" and "softness" of "drizzle and idle flowers" to the torrential heroism of emotion, that is, "everyone has a flower grave in the heart", "and this flower grave is locked by loneliness". Then take Nalan Xingde and Li Yu as examples to explain why loneliness is "the meaning of loneliness". Then, Lu You, Wang Wei and Yuan Zhen are listed to sublimate loneliness into "a huge emotional precipitation, into silence, and also into the power of writing, so that the idle flowers in the drizzle can become sonorous and powerful, and never fade away". The last paragraph goes to another level, from "a person's loneliness can be printed on the book, engraved on the monument, this loneliness is beautiful, it is for people to appreciate the" expansion "for Lin Zexu, Han Yu's loneliness is dedication, let people look up". If the examinee is only talking about loneliness, this article is just a general college entrance examination article, but the author promotes loneliness as dedication, which makes people look up to it, and the main idea is improved. At the same time, we can also see from this article that the author's rich material accumulation and deep thought precipitation, so this is a rather charming examination composition.
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