错误的说法:
吉姆,
如你所知,员工旷工是一个公认的持续存在的问题,而且这一问题对我们公司和我们所处行业的其它公司都有难以承受的财务影响等等。因此,我们应该考虑拨款在我们的总部基础设施中建造一个健身房。
RIGHT:
Jim,
I want you to approve the installation of an in-house gym.
正确的说法:
吉姆,
我想让你批准建立一个内部的健身房。
3. Structure your supporting argument into "digestible chunks."
3.把你的支持论据组织成“容易理解的小块”。
Once you've stated your conclusion, marshall the arguments that support your conclusion (i.e. the decision you want made). To make your arguments "digestible," break them into small "chunks," and present each point with a similar format and sentence structure.
一旦你说出了结论,就要使用能够支持你的结论(即你想要做出的决定)的论据。要使你的论据“容易理解”,你要把它们分成小“块”,并以相似的格式和句子结构呈现每一个论据。
WRONG:
According to a recently published government report, group physical fitness is extremely important even though very few companies actually demonstrate a commitment to it! Many firms identify physical fitness as an undervalued competitive asset, but don't have a plan for improvement in this area, even though physical fitness is strongly linked to corporate and individual economic and personal success. I feel that if we do not address the issue of physical fitness as it enhances workplace productivity, we will be left behind.
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