错误的说法：

你对此项目的支持，我将不胜感激。

RIGHT:

If you respond to this e-mail with your approval, I'll get the process started.

正确的说法：

如果你回复邮件批准此事，我将启动这个项目。

6. Stick a benefit in the subject line.

6.在主题行写上一个好处。

Your subject line (aka "title") is the most important part of an e-mail, which is why you write it last, after you've written down both your conclusion and the arguments and evidence that supports that conclusion.

你的主题行(又名“标题行”)是一封电子邮件中最重要的部分，这就是在你写下你的结论和支持结论的论点和证据后最后再写主题的原因。

Ideally, a subject line should accomplish two important tasks: 1) interest the recipient enough so that the e-mail gets opened and read, and 2) imply the conclusion that you want to the recipient to accept.

理想情况下，一个标题行应该完成两项重要任务：1)足够地吸引接收者，这样接收者能够打开电子邮件并阅读电子邮件2)暗示你想让接收者接受的结论。

In most cases, the best way to accomplish both tasks is to encapsulate a benefit (or benefits) that will result from the decision that you'd like the recipient to make.

在大多数情况下，完成两项任务最好的方法就是概括你想要接收者做出的决定将会带来的一个好处或者多个好处。

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