例1. There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV,radio,newspaper and so on。
剖析:本句后半部分for example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句。
改为:There are many ways to know society,for example,by TV,radio,and newspaper。
4、 悬垂修饰语(Dangling Modifiers)
所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。例如:At the age of ten,my grandfather died. 这句中at the age of ten 只点出十岁时,但没有说明 谁十岁时。按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点,全句就不那么费解了。
改为:When I was ten,my grandfather died。
例1. To do well in college,good grades are essential。
剖析:句中不定式短语 to do well in college 的逻辑主语不清楚。
改为:To do well in college, a student needs good grades。
5、词性误用(Misuse of Parts of Speech)
词性误用常表现为:介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。
例1. None can negative the importance of money。
剖析:negative 系形容词,误作动词。
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