11.跑题或不相关
There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car. 这个意思与文章的主题无关。
12.陈词滥调
It is okay for children to fail sometimes.所表达的意思很普通大多数人都已经知道到了,因而就没有必要再说出来。
13.标点问题
I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet.这是一个非常普遍的问题!许多学生在句子中使用了太多的句号,尤其是当他们用手写的时候。
14.重复冗余
Personally,I believe what the newspaper prints.一种意思的表述不止一次,或者某个词语不必要。
15.单数/复数
Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths.单词需要从单数变为复数,或者由复数变成单数。单数可数名词不能单独使用,应该将其变为复数形式或者加上限定词(a,the,my, his,her,Garys,no,any,1,3,50,most等等)。
16.拼写错误,主语、动词或宾语有问题
I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.句子的基本结构有问题,缺少主语、动词或宾语,或者这些成分重复。
17.语气与文章不符
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