每每批阅学生作文,都会被各种代词若非偷梁换柱即乱舞春秋的问题弄得晕头转向,一篇贯穿着代词错误的文章往往让人感觉迷雾重重,不知所云,若想拨云见日不是一件易事。
作为英语中衔接的一种重要形式,代词的使用值得引起重视和加以深思。
先来看两个学生作文当中出现的句子:
Medical care and education are cornerstones of the society, because it is needed by both youngsters and adults.
Doctors are not able to control themselvesprofitable activities.
请注意上面两句话中标记出来的代词,它们的使用均存在问题,具体是什么问题,我们将在下文中得以解答。
既然中国学生在英语的代词使用上是普遍存在错误的,在谈论错误分类之前,我们先来欣赏一下native speaker的文字中,代词使用的典范。
例文:
It is rather hard work: there is now no smooth road into the future: but we go round, or scramble over the obstacles. Weve got to live, no matter how many skies have fallen.
This was more or less Constance Chatterleys position. The war had brought the roof down over her head. And she had realized that one must live and learn.
D. H. Lawrence Lady Chatterleys Lover
翻译:这是一种颇为艰难的工作。现在没有一条通向未来的康庄大道,但是我们却迂回前进,或攀援障碍而过。不管天翻地覆,我们都得生活。
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