题目:Very few school children learn about the value of money and how to look after it, yet this is a critical life skill that should be taught as part of the school curriculum. Do you agree with this statement?
It is possibly true that schools could try to make children understand the importance of all these areas, but children are young and cannot look into the future or predict the skills that they will need。
上面这个让步段非常简洁,请注意作者使用的句型:It is possibly true that.,这是我们在让步段里经常用来开头的句型。下面我们再来看看如何用让步状语从句引导让步段:
Although watching TV or playing computer games do enrich childrens spare time and broaden their horizon to some extent, a sedentary lifestyle reduces healthy outdoor activities and will have long-term medical consequences for children. An increasing number of children suffer from obesity and near-sightedness as a result of spending too much time in front of a flashing screen。
在这个段落中,作者使用了让步状语从句,在继续论述久坐的生活方式对孩子健康方面的弊端前,先说了一下它的优点,进而反驳,从而起到了鲜明的对比反差效果,突出了这种生活方式对孩子健康造成的巨大伤害。
二、五段式每段都用让步段
这种写法属于非主流写法,需要考生具备一定的写作功底,对论点的把握火候得当。这种写法类似于新托福中综合写作里质疑论据合理性的写法。对于志在高分的同学来说可以尝试一下,下面我们就来看一个例子:
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