Those against the use of animal testing claim that it is inhumane to use animal in experiments. I disagree completely. It would be much more inhumane to test new drugs on children or adults. Even if it were possible, it would also take much longer to see potential effects, because of the length of time we live compared to laboratory animals such as rats or rabbits。
Opponents of animal testing also claim that the results are not applicable to humans. This may be partly true. Some drugs have had to be withdrawn, despite testing. However, we simply do not have alternative methods of testing. Computer models are not advanced enough, and testing on plants is much less applicable to humans than tests on animals such as monkeys. Until we have a better system, we must use animal testing。
A further point often raised against animal testing is that it is cruel. Some of the tests certainly seem painful, but the great majority of people on this planet eat meat or wear leather without any guilt. Where is their sympathy for animals? Furthermore, animals clearly do not feel the same way as humans, and scientists are careful to minimize stress in the animals, since this would damage their research。
这篇作文是关于是否应该拿动物做实验的话题。作者是支持继续拿动物做实验的,在他的每个主体段中,他都是先讲了反对者的一个观点,然后再反驳。请密切关注下作者在每个主体段首句中使用的句型:Those against. claim that.:Opponents of . also claim that.:A further point often raised against . is that.。前2句为宾语从句,最后一句为表语从句。从主语的选择上作者也花了心思,分别在第一句和第二句使用了不同单词组合,但是意思是一致的。因此建议大家不妨在一开始写主体段首句的时候先模仿他的这种写法。接下来我们再来看看次句的句型:I disagree completely:This may be partly true:Some of the ., but.。这三组句型同样做到了抑扬顿挫,第一个句子语气最强,而后二个句子语气明显递减。对于这种安排,笔者认为并非一定要按照他的模式,这取决于你在三个段落中的观点的排列,但是一般来说,语气最强的或者最重要的那个观点,要么放在第一段写,要么放到最后一段里写。笔者推荐将最重要的观点放在第一个主体段里论述。
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