When we learn a language, we should also learn the cultures and lifestyles of this country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that when you begin to learn a language, both cultures and lifestyles are indispensable for learning. Only learning cultrues and lifestyles can you have a good commond of what you learn.
结构分析: 1+1的模式,最后一句是主题句。问题还是有的,比如第一句是介绍题目背景,但似乎写得和题目还是太像了,最好是能够变换的程度再大些。而最后一句表达观点的主题句却有明显的语法错误和拼写错误。所以起评分也只能在5-6 分之间了。值得一提的是,作者首段给人的感觉文章比较简练,不像有的文章为了凑字数,废话很多。
First of all, cultures paly a big role in languages. Colloquial phrases are pleasant to the ear, not only because they are familiar, but also because they reflect a unique aspect of a culture which is a symbol of countries or living areas. So necessary do you learn cultures first when you determine to learn a new language.
结构分析:作者还是一贯地秉承简洁的写作风格,给人感觉结构非常清晰,作者的写作意图和内容也非常容易把握。需要指出的是,作者很明显在第一段和这段的最后一句话都企图想用倒装句来增加语言的多样性,可惜的是都错了!!!看来倒装句没有学好,呵呵。。。
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