People in the modern world are enjoying greater wealth but they are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the reasons? Suggest some measures to solve this problem.
个性化引言段
I keep on nodding in agreement when seeing the background information of the question. I myself have always been struggling not to be overweight. Unfortunately, like most others, I failed. As to why people nowadays are not as fit and active as they were, various factors can be identified.
二,主体段(理由段)中的个性化表达:
主体段(理由段)是比较难以进行个性化表达的部分,或者说在理由段进行个性化表达要特别注意分寸,因为如果理由段中的个性化表达过多,则会造成前文所说到的降低文章论据普遍实用性和说服力的结果。那么如何达到个性化和说服力的平衡性呢?我们可以先看两段文字:
Some people warn that the era of the silver screen is coming to an end and that people will eventually lose interest in going to the cinema. Do you agree or disagree with this view?
个性化理由段-讨论 interest in going to the cinema
However, the cinemas in my home country are still full every weekend and when a new film is released we are all keen to go and watch it. In fact, many small cinemas have been rebuilt and we can now go to large centres that have six or eight cinema screens and show up to ten different films a night. An evening out at the cinema is fun and some films, particularly horror and science fiction films, are much better on the big screen.
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