This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 8 score. Here is the examiners comment:

　　This answer summarises the key features of both charts and integrates them well. Clear trends are identified and supported with appropriately-selected figures. The answer could only be improved by adding an introduction to the general topic of the charts.

　　The information is well organised, with a clearly-signalled progression. Linking words are used accurately and precisely, although there is occasional omission. Paragraphing is used well initially, but lapses in the later section.

　　A very good range of vocabulary is used to convey the information concisely and accurately with only occasional inappropriacy. Words are used precisely and there are no errors in spelling or word form.

　　A wide range of structures is used and most sentences in this answer are accurate. Errors are rare and do not affect communication in this answer.

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