那么我们先来看看这样的错误应该怎样来修正?
修正方法一:将句子分割成两个独立的简单句:There are many students. They go abroad.这种方法虽然没有任何语法错误,但连贯性不强而且过于简单,比较适合于写作初学者,在雅思写作中不予推荐。因此我们可以将其进行进一步的改良:1)增加连接词,根据本句的含义,可以增加表顺接的连词and:There are many students and they go abroad. 2)用分号分隔句子:There are many students; they go abroad.
修正方法二:去掉根据中文直译而多余的there be,直接恢复成一个简单句:Many students go abroad. 句子简单明了,符合英文习惯。
修正方法三:将其中一个句子保留作为主体句,根据句子意义将另外一个句子变成某个从属成分或是从句:1)There are many students going abroad. 2) There are many students who go abroad.满足了某些学生希望使用复杂句型或是非谓语动词的需求。
在此提醒考生们,无论哪种方式,都是以遵守英文写作句式的基本法则作为基础的,将雅思写作简单地等同于头脑中观点的翻译是绝对行不通的。
我们再来看一个也属于run-on sentence的例子:Some people think that pets make too much noise and disturb the neighbor, however others consider keeping pets a good way to kill the time.
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