根据刚才我们对于run-on sentence的说明和分析,这个句子没有正确地运用连词来分隔句子,而是将however这个副词当做连词使用。这种错误在雅思考生中间也十分常见,主要问题是由于对词性把握不够。我们先根据刚才的思路重新修正一下这个句子:
1)Some people think that pets make too much noise and disturb the neighbor;however, others consider keeping pets a good way to kill the time.
2)Some people think that pets make too much noise and disturb the neighbor,while others consider keeping pets a good way to kill the time.
英文写作中,不同词性后面所接的结构是很不同的,最容易混淆的三种就是副词、连词及介词,副词只能表达语气,不能改变句子原有结构;连词可以连接句子,起到连贯的效果;介词后接名词性短语。我们来试着翻译一个句子,区别一下三者的使用:由于生活的快节奏,许多人选择在外吃快餐而不是自己做饭。
1)连词:由于本句为因果关系,我们可以将前半句变成一个原因状语从句,as作为连接词:As the pace of life accelerates, modern people prefer to have fast food outside than cook by themselves at home.
2)介词:还是在原因上进行变化,将其变成一个句子的状语结构,选择with: With the fast pace of life, modern people prefer to have fast food outside than cook by themselves at home.
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