例1. and we can also know the society by serving it yourself.

　　剖析：句中人称代词we 和反身代词yourself指代不一致。

　　改为：we can also know society by serving it ourselves.

　　七. 不间断句子

　　什么叫run-on sentence?请看下面的例句。

　　例1. there are many ways we get to know the outside world.

　　剖析：这个句子包含了两层完整的意思：there are many ways. 以及we get to know the outside world.。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。

　　改为：there are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或：there are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world.

　　八. 措词毛病

　　diction是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题，囿于教学时间紧迫，教师平时在这方面花的时间往往极其有限，影响了学生在写作中没有养成良好的推敲，斟酌的习惯。他们往往随心所欲，拿来就用。所以作文中用词不当的错误比比皆是。

　　例1. the increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.

　　剖析：显然，考生把obstacles障碍，障碍物误作substance物质了。另外the increasing use 应改为abusive use 。

　　改为：the abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.

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