On the other hand, taking the circumstance of a crime and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite for establishing and ensuring justice and equity. A person killing in self-defense cannot be compared to a serial killer, moving from one victim to the next.
1. 非谓语
①On the one hand, fixed punishment will have a deterring effect on society.
②This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimizing the number of crimes committed.
③This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.
④A person killing in self-defense cannot be compared to a serial killer, moving from one victim to the next.
2. 虚拟语气
①If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary.
②This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.
3. 对策
①避免常见语法错误
常见语法错误有:双谓语;介词搭配;并列结构。
②三大从句
熟练使用三大从句:名词性从句,状语从句,定语从句。
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