考官范文开头段
A childs education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents only.
显然,考官没使用以上我提到的世间最恶俗的写法。
我们再来看一篇考官在剑5里面写的满分作文的开头段。
题目2:
Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
考官范文开头段
Over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations. This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis. This means that change is not always a personal option, but an inescapable fact of life, and we need to constantly adapt to keep pace with it.
纵观剑3-8上考官给出的满分范文,考官开头段的风格永远都是针对题目中一两个关键词进行背景拓展,甚至加上自己的一些和题目相关的一些发挥,简练而直逼核心内容,不会说一大堆没有营养的空话套话。我对于模板的态度一直很鲜明:一切以实战需要为准,不说空话。每个考生的英语功底都是不同的,英语基础好,有实力原创的同学考前不需要准备固定的套路,而应该把时间用在研究真题和范文上;而对于确实没有能力原创太多的同学来说,如果不事先准备好逻辑框架,在考试中真就有可能写不出来,字数不够或者逻辑颠三倒四。所以模板因人而异,少用精用而不滥用。
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