4. 关于逻辑
雅思文章的逻辑一直是很多烤鸭们非常困扰的一个问题,因为逻辑问题相对语言质量而言更加抽象和难以把握。下面我用简单的例子来详细阐述下逻雅思写作中的逻辑问题:
第一方面:我们要正确使用指代词,而使用的指代词包括人称代词,物主代词和一些特定的词语。
使用人称代词或物主代词代替文章中重复出现的词
剑桥4 test4 task2范文中的句子:
But I think the solution to the problem lies with the families, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children. If they could raise them to be considerate of others and to be social, responsible individuals, the whole community would benefit.
使用特定的词语来指代某一类事物
这些词包括one, that, those, so, this, not和do的各种形式。同时,被替代的可以是名词、动词,也可以是句子。
①替代名词
剑桥7 test B task2范文中的句子:
I agree with the view that stars in the entertainment business are usually over paid. However, it is also true that it is only those who reach the very top of their profession who can get these huge salaries.
②替代动词
剑桥4 test4 task2范文中的句子:
【肖宇:突破雅思写作5.5分魔咒】相关文章:
最新
2016-10-19
2016-06-13
2016-06-13
2016-06-13
2016-06-13
2016-06-13