But there are cases in which children from rich families have grown up to be very smart, accomplished individuals. Many of them even start businesses independent from their families. But still most of them know more about having fun than about being a good working professional.

　　To sum up, less privileged family background generally enables children to be more responsible and independent. Poor kids value hard work more, handle competition better than rich kids, and cope with problems better after becoming adults.

　　这篇雅思写作范文的写作思路：文章着重讨论贫富不同家庭出身的孩子在成年以后解决问题能力也不同，普通家庭出身的孩子此方面能力更强。

　　态度：同意

　　论点一：Lack of wealth in a family usually helps children to become independent and responsible individuals.

　　论据：对待玩具的不同---more responsible，对待学习的不同-----more independent，帮助家庭工作---more responsible and independent

　　论点二：Children from less affluent families learn about competition early in life.

　　论据：普通人家出身孩子对待改变人生的态度和出身富家孩子的对比

　　让步段论点：But there are cases in which children from rich families have grown up to be very smart, accomplished individuals.

　　结论：总结之前的提到的主要观点

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