Problem 2 the ideas are confused 观点混淆
This is also a very common mistake. There are plenty of ideas to write an essay. The problem is that the reader/examiner does not know what the main ideas are.
Tip make sure you have one main idea per paragraph. This should be clear from the first sentence of the paragraph
Problem 3 too many ideas 观点太多
Yes, some people do have too many ideas. This is a trap for candidates aiming for a high score. In particular, if they are used to writing academic essays. IELTS is a 250 word essay marked on language. That means it is probably much shorter than you are used to and there are no marks for quality and quantity of ideas.
Tip select only enough ideas to write a complete essay that means one per paragraph
Finding ideas for essays 怎么确定观点呢?
Step 1 understand the difference between ideas, reasons and examples 区分观点、原因、例子的区别
When I ask my students in a class for ideas, they quite often stare at me in silence. When I ask them the question why or ask them to give me an example, they have plenty to say. That should tell you there is a difference between ideas, reasons and examples. The good news is ideas are not the problem in IELTS, what you need are reasons and examples. They are normally much easier to find.
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