Notes
You should see that this paragraph follows almost the same model. There is one clear and simple idea in the first sentence. It relates back to the question words: while others think humans should still take some action. The rest of the paragraph explains that idea:
moral duty because it is our fault
science can now help through genetics
zoos are not the only solution
Key concept you dont need to include all your reasons and examples
My notes for this essay included all this. They are my notes, so you dont need to understand them all. What I want you to see is that I have not included everything. In an academic essay I might have. Here I have selected the ideas that were easiest to write about.
zoos
breed in captivity
preservation
giant pandas
medical benefits
loss of habitat
river dolphins
biodiversity
logging and rainforests
dams
progress of man
deforestation
bamboo forest
science
cloning
genetics
moral responsibility
Key concept balance your paragraphs
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