盲点2 : 短小精悍
和长篇累牍型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生,为了保险起见,这类考生作文中充满了简单的is/am/are 的主系表和主谓宾句型。
盲点2击破: 灵活多变原则
这类考生如果能稍稍变得aggressive 一些,他们将是考场上最大的黑马。如以Parents and teachers often link childrens score to their academic ability 这个简单句为例,通过强调句型的包装我们得到:
It is childrens score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications.
通过倒装句的包装我们可以得到:
So important is childrens score that parents and teachers often link them to childrens academic ability .
通过插入语的包装我们可以得到:
Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to childrens academic ability by teachers and parents.
通过分词短语的包装我们可以得到:
Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link childrens score to their academic ability .
通过如此灵活的加工和包装,你会发现,简单句经过稍稍润色原来也可以如此光彩照人,这要比无数大词生僻词堆砌形成的长难句更加赢得考官的青睐。
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