支持段2主题句:The human flesh search infringes upon peoples privacy.
支持段3主题句:The human flesh search brings mental and physical distress to both the villain and his innocent relatives and friends.
结尾段:强调或总结主题思想,自然结尾。
我们可以看到,上述提纲中的主题思想是以直线的形式表达出来的:每一段的内容支持本段的主题句,而每段的主题句又支持文章的中心思想。支持主题句的内容应该越来越具体,而不是一会儿具体,一会儿笼统,或越来越笼统。这就是英语写作特有的文章连贯模式,或思维模式。
那么中国人的思维模式又是怎样的呢?Kaplan指出,东方人写作时的思维模式是圆周型的,他们会围绕一个问题旁敲侧击,但始终说不到点子上。当然,我们不能说Kaplan的话绝对正确,或适用于所有中国英语学习者,但笔者在教学中确实见识过不少这样的例子,比如下面这篇作文。
My Opinion of the Human Flesh Search
The human flesh search is a net word that came into being a few years ago. It brings convenience to people but at the same time causes various problems as well. With large numbers of human flesh search events taking place, it gradually destroys peoples private life and causes problems to people.
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