Poverty, hunger, disease and war are mans greatest enemies and the world would be an infinitely better place if the powerful nations devoted half as much money and effort to those problems as they do to the space race. For the first time in his history, man has the overwhelming resources to combat human suffering, yet he squanders them on meaningless pursuits.

　　If a man deprived himself and his family of food in order to buy and run a car, we would consider him mad. Individuals with limited budgets usually get their priorities right: they provide themselves with necessities before trying to obtain luxuries. Why cans great nations act in the same sensible way? Let us put our house in order first and let space look after itself.

　　严师点评：

　　考官朋友推荐的一篇难得一见的9分作文.经典的地方实在太多了，比如开头，比如结尾, 比如论证手法.作者看似选了一个不容易处理的结构-单支，但由于有强大的语言实力，不仅做到了自圆其说，而且论证充分，文笔生动有力.按小五大六的方法做个范文笔记，你会大有收获......比如，作者3次提到太空研究的一个弱项----投资的性价比不高，有3个精彩的也是大量作文绝对要用的经典表达，你能找出几个?

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