例1 the increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
剖析:显然,考生把obstacles障碍,障碍物误作substance物质了。另外the increasing use 应改为abusive use 。
改为:The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
九、累赘
言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组;能用词组的不用从句或句子。如:in spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.
本句的the fact that he is lazy系同谓语从句,我们按照上述能用词组的不用从句可以改为:in spite of his laziness, I like him.
例1 For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
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