分析:本句后半部分for example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句。
改为:There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper.
四、悬垂修饰语
所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。
比如:at the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中at the age of ten只写出十岁时,但没有说明谁十岁时,按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改得明确一点,读者或考官在读句子时就不会误解了。
改为:When I was ten, my grandfather died.
To do well in college, good grades are essential.
分析:句中不定式短语to do well in college的逻辑主语不清楚。
改为:To do well in college, a student needs good grades.
五、词性误用
词性误用常表现为:介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。这一点是目前考生最容易出错的地方。
比如:None can negative the importance of money.
分析:negative系形容词,误作动词。
改为:None can deny the importance of money.
六、指代不清
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