quake-scattered area
victimsthe injured; the missing; the death toll; the wounded soldiers; the affected; suffering; loss; the trapped; the buried, the homelessorphan; the old without any family members;
survivor; survival
rescuer; aid; help; rescue; relief operation; relief donation; supplies; relief cash and material; red cross; emergency aid; first aid kit; emergency shelter, food , medical care, emergency response team; evacuate
condolence; mourn
通过这种思维方式,我们还可以想出很多能体现灾难的语言。尤其是下义词的有效使用,即可掩盖词汇量不大的缺陷,还可以让文章生动,说理性强。
官方给出的高分文章也可以体现这一特点。
Children of poor parents are prematurely exposed to the problems of adult life eg. learning to survive on a low family income and sacrificing luxuries for essential items. These children begin to see the realities of life in their home or social environment. Their parents own struggles serve as an example to them.
引自IELTS Scores Explained DVD
Cohesive device:
通过同意转换和代词的使用,该段每句话主语紧扣题目主题信息:children from poor families,
Children of poor parents;These children;Their parents
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