2012.2.9 The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects to everyone. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
在雅思写作中,经常会考察全球化的影响,由于很多学生不会用英语表达,导致写的文章也不够生动。那么我们就一起来看看Economist中是怎么写的吧?
1 GLOBALISATION has become the buzzword of the last two decades.
Buzzword:流行词
2 The sudden increase in the exchange of knowledge, trade and capital around the world, driven by technological innovation, from the internet to shipping containers, thrust the term into the limelight.
这句话对全球化的定义做了解释,也就是我们写作中的解释说明的论证方法。其中,driven by technological innovation, 是插入语,这也是写作中非常好的表达方法。thrust the term into the limelight 指的是将其推入了人们的视野当中,也就是说全球化变得流行起来,可以替换同学们经常使用的become popular这个表达。
3 Globalisation has enriched the world scientifically and culturally, and benefited many people economically as well. The United Nations has even predicted that the forces of globalisation may have the power to eradicate poverty in the 21st century.
这句话最大的特色就是动词和副词的使用。很多学生在写作的时候受母语汉语的迁移影响,总是会首先想到do/make/let等动词,这在英语中是不够地道地表达,因此我们要学习英语中各种动词的丰富使用,比如这句话中的enrich,benefit,eradicate。在论证方法上,这两句是在讲全球化的有利之处,第二句话是进一步的解释论证,而且使用了UN的预测,很多学生在进行举例论证的时候总是列举个人的小例子,很没有说服力。
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