应该说,中英文在议论文的结尾,还是有些微妙的差别的。雅思作文的结尾往往比开头和主题句还要重要,最起码应避免明显中式表达的痕迹,不必喊口号或者抒情。总的原则是:可以重申全文要点,可以提出具体措施,再加上地道,至少是书面语的措辞,就是一个好的雅思作文结尾!
请看这么一道题及其结尾:
V104 Wild animals have no place in the 21st century. Some people think that preventing these wild animals from dying out is a waste of resource. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
结尾1:
Someone said safeguard of wild animals is a waste of resource, but I do not agree. It seems we would spend some time, wealth and manpower on this meaningless thing. Actually we also do this for human being ourselves. lets protect wild animals right now.
评:结尾第一句话,是对于考官给出的观点的转述,应放在文章开头就出现。结尾不是申明中心句,而应是对全文观点的总结。大作文要收的坚定有力,seems让文章显得说服力不足,meaningless跟全文观点相孛。最后一句有喊口号的意味,不符合英语议论文的习惯,同样的意思可改换客观平实的文风收尾。
结尾2:
To sum up, we can not live without wild animals due to their profound effects on us. For this reason, we should try our best to protect them. Lets remember one thing---- protecting wild animals is equivalent to protecting ourselves.
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