Topic4-Your opinion on DINK families
My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.
分析:看上去写了3句话其实就一个意思:Dink Families不好!明明一句话就能说清楚的,干嘛要这么罗嗦地翻来覆去变着方的来讲同一个意思?让我俞老师来揭穿他:他想混~字~数~!对于一些基础比较薄弱的同学来说,雅思大作文250字的字数要求很让他们头疼,于是就出此把一句话翻来覆去说的下策。可是这样做的话真的是太侮辱考官的智商了,要知道这根本是小学生才会玩的把戏,下面一则笑话可资证明:
小明是一个小学二年级的学生,老师要求每个同学写一篇两百字的日记,可是小明写到昨天我的小狗小白不见了,我很着急,到街上去找它就灵感枯竭再也写不下去了,小明抓破头皮想了半天,忽然想到一个好办法-他继续写道:为了找到小白,我在大街上一遍又一遍地呼喊着小白的名字:小白~小白~小白~小白~小白~
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Topic-The importance of environmental protection
This issue is surely very important, lets talk about it!
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