诊断:考生原本想用的应该是rather than,表示而不是,却错误地写成了形式类似的other than,表示除了之外,整句话的意思就改变了。
修改:However,whether the government should allocate fund to public services rather than waste...
【细节五】非谓语动词用法
7. 原文:However, whether... to public services than waste money on arts is...
诊断:ratherthan是介词,后面可接名词或动名词形式,但此处考生错误地接了动词原形。
修改:However,whether... to public services than wasting money on arts is...
8. 原文:In my view... but spending money on arts is definitely not just waste money.
诊断:考生想表达在艺术上投资绝不仅仅是浪费金钱,但却错误地用动词原形waste作表语,暴露了基本功不扎实的问题
修改:In myview... but spending money on arts is definitely not just wasting money.
注:除了动名词之外,其他几种非谓语动词动词不定式、现在分词、过去分词等,也是写作中的重头戏。如果用得好自然锦上添花,但这些往往也是最容易出错的部分。
【总结】
看完以上错误分析,是不是深刻体会到了The devil is in the details这句话的内涵?
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