二、角色定位实例
我们现在以雅思写作中关于part-time job的一句话为例,利用角色定位来试分析。
如:兼职工作会使他们过早接触一些社会丑陋的现象,因为学生们正处在成型期,无法辨明是非,所以很容易会被误入歧途。
许多同学一看到这句话就犯晕,只觉错综复杂,然而对以上这句话稍作分析,我们不难发现以下特点:
1,2个名词:兼职工作学生们
2,4个动词:使..。接触,处于,辨明误入歧途
下面我们利用角色定位,通过图例更清晰地理清他们之间的关系
图例
1,将本句中兼职工作定位为女主角即主角名词,使接触定位为男主角即主角动词,将会出现在长句子的主句中,其他为配角,再配合进从句等各种表达,那么本句就可以写成:
Part-time job makes students get in touch with certain ugly phenomenon in the society earlier,because they are in shaping period and can not distinguish the right from the wrong clearly, which may make them go astray easily。
2,将本句中学生们定位为女主角,辨明定位为男主角,其他为配角,那么本句可以写成:
Students can not tell the right from the wrong clearly due to their staying at shaping period, so the part-time job, which may get them in touch with certain ugly phenomenon in the society earlier, might easily make them go astray。
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