Nowadays some people tend to think that they own beauty if they have a good looking. They are not satisfied with their appearance. They spend much money taking a kind of operation. Can beauty really be man-made? If so, everybody can get beauty. As a result, there is no beauty at all.
The appearance is given by our parents and is unique in the world. Everyone should value it. I'd ( 1 ) rather prefer nature as the standard of beauty. Just accept yourself, accept everything the god gives to you, and create the beautiful life ( 2 ) belong to you.
Many heroes don't have beautiful surface. However, their beautiful images often come to our minds. Their beauty comes from their contributions to the society.
Don't be eager to judge whether a person is beautiful or not without a thorough understanding of him. A beautiful person is not the one with a good looking, but with a broad and kind heart.
Good looking is pleasant while spiritual beauty is more important. As an old saying goes, Virtue is fairer than beauty. If you have a kind heart, you own real beauty.
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本文以谚语漂亮不能当饭吃为题,直截了当地亮出了自己的观点。全文以美德胜于美貌为主线,阐述了追求外形美而放弃了内在美并不是真正的美,英雄之美源于奉献。文章观点鲜明,行文顺畅,结构严谨,用词恰当。难能可贵的是,作者能运用谚语来强化自己的观点,有较强的英语语言组织能力和表达能力。
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