文中语言错误：（ 1 ） I'd rather prefer 改为 I'd prefer . would rather 表宁愿， prefer 也是宁愿，两者不能连用在一起。（ 2 ） belong to 改为 belonging to . belonging to you 在此处作定语。

　　　　※反方习作※

　　　　A good face is a letter of recommendation

　　　　Some people say beauty is just a skin deep. I don't quite agree with them. Good appearance often makes a big difference in social communication， competition， finding jobs and so on. Not only can good appearance help you become more confident， but also it helps you be impressed. If you want to get a good job， the first sight is important. Physical beauty is （ 1 ） probable to draw much attention.

　　　　However， we have to face this problem. We have no right to choose our appearance. When necessary， we can make up ourselves. If you think doing this is a good way to improve your confidence， just do what you really want to regardless （ 2 ） others' opinion. It is worth all the money and time. Facing a variety of social pressures， we young people should build confidence. Confidence is the key to success.

　　　　In a word， you may not be the most beautiful one， but you can be the most attractive one； you may not the best one， but you can be the most confident one. Show yourself and chances will kiss you in time.

　　　　点评：爱美之心，人皆有之。一副好脸孔就是一封介绍信。作者围绕这一主题进行阐述。在现代社会里，美丽的外表在社交、竞争、求职等方面的有着不可低估的作用。作者立意大胆，构思巧妙，很有个性。文章叙述清楚，条理清晰，层次分明，过渡自然。在语言表达上，巧妙地使用了倒装、排比等句式和一些亮点词语，增强了文章的感染力。对于一名中学生来说，本文不愧是一篇优秀习作。

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