（ 8 ） provided with 改为 provided by .

　　　　（ 9 ）最后一句 Though China has taken great changes ， there are a great deal 考生受汉语思维的影响，应该改为 Though great changes have taken place in China ， there is much 。

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　　Education System in China Today

　　　　Education in China today has been developing rapidly. Most children start school by the age of six. They spend five or six years in primary school and three years in junior middle school， which are compulsory education.

　　　　After that， some can attend professional school for two to three years before work. Some attend senior middle school for three years. Students have to pass a series of examinations before entering a college or university. The college or university life lasts two to four years. Now part of the cost is provided by with their families， although students can get the support from the college. After they graduate， they can go and find jobs.

　　　　Though great changes have taken place in the fields of education in China， there is still much to be improved.

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