在动笔之前,考生应明确题目要求,因为是你的一段亲身经历,所以必须使用第一人称。考生应认真审题,把握图中人物关系及图中的提示语。因为故事发生在过去,所以短文的时态应以过去时为主。
范文中在写作顺序上采用了插叙的手法,增强了短文的感染力。文章的关联词和过渡语使用得体。如: the other day, As we came to , but , So .
范文中使用了较复杂的句子结构,如:
(1)现在分词作伴随状语:① with me sitting on the seat behind ② Pointing to a policeman
(2) make 接不定式的复合结构: and made us catch
(3)条件状语从句: as long as we did
参考范文
The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind. As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us. We ' ve found you at long last, they said, but we didn ' t know them. Pointing to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, He stopped us about an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. So come on, stand here. Hope you don ' t have to wait as long as we did. Good luck.
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