1. 你已于昨天收到他的邀请信。
2. 从来信中,你得知 Bob Geldof 为了帮助非洲的穷人,已向非洲的一些国家寄了一大笔钱,而现在正在准备组织一些著名的歌唱家举行音乐会,以便能募集更多的资金。
3. 为了支持他的工作,表示对他的尊敬,你愿意接受他的邀请,参加下周在伦敦举行的音乐会。
4. 祝愿音乐会成功。
学生习作:
May 1,2003
Dear Bob,
I have received your invitation to an important concert for one day. From your letter I know that you have already sent a big number of money to African countries to help the poor people. Now you are organizing some famous singers to hold a concert so as to collecting more money. In order to support you, express my respect to you, I'm ready to attend the concert holding in London next week.
May the concert successful.
Yours,
John Smith
名师点评:
本习作要点基本齐全(除漏掉要点 1 外),语言较为流畅,格式也正确,特别是在时态运用方面恰当,显示了学生良好的语言素养。但存在着语法、搭配或表达上的错误。
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