B:It's a flat of 25 square metres,with a bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed,a sofa,a desk and a chair.
三、布局谋篇独具匠心
在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,2002高考范文堪称典范。请看:
Opinions are divided on the question.
60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more,it will become necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand,40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers,and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested,however,fees should be charged low.
1)该文使用Opinions are divided作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句,使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。
2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested,however,fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。
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