thank you
名师指导:
[1]去掉来
[2]we will implement a
[3]Next Monday
[4]在哪里啊?
[5]关于惩罚,最好不提。
网友作文四:
to: All Staff
from: Susuan Wu
To creat a nonsmoking office room, we hope that smoking is forbidden in the work office from Sep.1st. Would you please enjoy your smoking in the Launch by closing the office door.
Thank you for your coperation.
名师指导:
整体很干脆,但是语气比较客气,而且没有看出是公司新政策的实行啊!
网友作文五:
To: All staff
From: Sarah Buffay
As you all know, there is an increasing dispute about smoking in the office. Now wed like to formulate a policy both fair to smokers and nonsmokers: The vacant room 408 will be opened as Smoking Room from tomorrow. All smokers may go there within the time limitation from 9:00a.m. to 4:00p.m. But smokers are not allowed to smoke outside this room.[1]
If you have any problems, please contact me. [2]
名师指导:
[1]去掉。
[2]这是信件的结尾,不是memo的,直接用 thank you 就可以。
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