评价
This is a well-developed response.
The four-paragraph organizational structure serves as a useful framework for the writer to develop a position on the issue.
The opening paragraph presents the writers position and announces the plan to present two examples to support that position.
As promised, two examples follow in the next two paragraphs.
The discussion of these examples is focused, relevant, and clear.Using vivid details and an emphatic writing style, the writer shows how music and advertising have negatively influenced American values.
The final paragraph is an extension of the advertising example, focusing on the Internet as part of the advertising system.
While the writer does little more than speculate on the influence that the Internet might have, this point does lead the reader to the writers lively conclusion.
The vivid picture of the writer enjoying the media-defined good life effectively illustrates the writers position that the media do, indeed, influence people in our society.
Overall, the reasoning is persuasive and the examples are well chosen, but the argument lacks the insight and cogency necessary for a score of 6.
The ideas in the essay are expressed clearly, although precision of language is not a strong feature.
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