解释了他的由来~用回revolutionary更好的标示出来是为了回应上文. Nonetheless很明显。没有用我们经常运用的however, returning soldiers could not be held responsible for the social upheaval非常贴切! that America experienced. There had to be another cause, and there was, the media.长短句的结合效果就是这么好!用逗号把media隔开~突出了媒体的重要性~本科学英语的兄弟姐妹大约也学过这种现象~就是为了强调突出~但是我们却很少能够运用 Although the films of the era, era用得非常贴切~虽然这里也犯了重复小小毛病如果前面首段用epoch的话就相当好了were silent they spoke volumes to the society for which they were created. Women in these movies wore their hemlines a few inches shorter than the decade before them and they wore cosmetics to accentuate their new bobbed haircuts整个句子都不是我们非英语国家同学所能够表达的!里面的用词hemilines/ inches/cosmetics/ accentuate/ bobbed/haircuts都是我们学习的对象!但是不幸的是~我们即使学会用这些词汇~也写不出来这么自然的句子. The movies, as well as the books of that era, demonstrated作者替换了show/indicate等低级词汇 a new materialistic 甚至这里用了一个哲学词汇! attitude that America had never before experienced. Films portrayed很明显的替换了describe而且更加精当 every character as having the money to buy a new car, drink, smoke and partake in the leisures of life, a philosophy一个同位语漂亮! that was soon adopted看到了~人家不用choose by the youth of the decade. The use of the media in the twenties was to serve as a catalyst for the revolutionary ideas that were circulating be to/ serve as我想大家一定懂什么意思吧~但是很少自己用吧~serve as表达了根play role同样的效果~但是请看后面~catalyst更加显示出作者对于词汇的掌握更重要的是词汇对于观点表达的深刻认识~. The films and books of that era sped小词!这个就是native speaker和我们的区别~我们很少运用名词作动词用~这个就是需要积累归纳! America along its path小词! of change that eventually led to the greatest social unrest用得漂亮! that the United States had ever known.
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