背景介绍也分成几种,比较常见的是社会背景介绍,即With the development of society/technology/informationModern world is becoming so...这种内容比较泛而且比较好写,一般遇到大部分题倒都能套上。但由于这个概念非常泛化,所以很容易就跟观点脱节,从而导致文章的开头逻辑不明确,背景介绍成为废话。
还是来看板油的习作
150Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete.
Evolving with the development of technology, television and computer on internet supply human beings more and more information of the great world, such as pictures and literal introductions of many places. Should the information on television and computer take place of tourism? I do not think so. Even our visions are broadened by the information, television and computer would not prevent people from traveling, but stimulate people to do so.
红色为背景介绍,蓝色为主题句。
第一句能不能联系到第二句?可以,但并不直接。supply more information跟取代旅游有什么必然联系么?红字部分和蓝字部分的转折缺乏联系,这期间缺掉了一个环节,即问题的产生:由于电脑电视带来的信息越来越多,很多地方不去都可以知道,于是乎,有的人认为旅游过时了。然后再提问,水到渠成。
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