There is no reason that silver screen should not spend more on advertisement, however, there is reason to continue to invest in diverse, quality films. 本文的满分的另一个有利保障就是最后一段的精准的概括,可以说,最后一段总结了全文的态度,使得考官看完最后一段能迅速找到全文的论证核心。这是有必要的 Furthermore, the company must consider carefully what it chooses to emphasize in its advertisement.这一段同时给出了建议改进方案。最后,本文实在是相当的短,之所以这么短,是因为省去了开头复述原题,省去了单列一段质疑让步的假设,比如说这里的让步是广告是有用的,所以就要质疑在什么时候是有用的,如果再加上这样一段外加演绎的话就会更好。同样,这篇文章语言十分的简洁,基本上没有废话,没有所谓的亮点词句,这也许是给我们的启发,告诉我们更应该关注什么:立论点以及安排方式以及论证方式。这三个论点的安排是:市场规模==〉人民生活标准==〉人不相信评论家==〉人对于质量的要求,顺序是从外在条件到内在条件。
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Although the essay begins by stating that the argument is relatively sound, it immediately goes on to develop a critique.
The essay identifies three major flaws in the argument and provides a careful and thorough analysis.
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