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Where does knowledge come from? It comes from discoveries and inventions. So its not difficult to deduce that the original source of knowledge is fantasy or imagination that can accelerate the progress in both scientific and artistic fields. There is no doubt that without imagination or fantasy knowledge would never exist. Therefore, its not difficult to conclude that talent and creativity are more critical than the ability to absorb knowledge.
本段评点
知识来自发现和发明。所以,知识的来源是幻想和想象。这句话既违反逻辑,也不符合事实。人类的许多发现,比如火,比如青霉素,天花疫苗,比如美洲大陆,都是偶然发现的, 与想象力或者幻想没有任何关系。后面的一句,毫无疑问,没有想象和幻想,知识将不存在。这句话也让人捏把汗,果真是毫无疑问吗?通过前面两个非常有问题的观点,是无法得出 创造力比吸收知识更重要这个结论的。这一段给人的感觉是宣布了好几个论点, 而且有的论点明显违反常识。所以这个开头段非常失败。
第二段
Invention is the result of a creative process, and those inventions or discoveries are often examples taught in todays class. Take electronic light as an example, the inventor of it is Edison who had created many things we are using today. He had done more than 3000 experiments before he finally found the correct material that can light enough and not easy to melt at a really high temperature. During his 3000 experiments, he imagines everything in his daily life, including iron, bamboo and even the red beard of his colleagues. His patience and curiosity together with his imagination and fantasy helped him successfully invented the light bulb that we are still using nowadays.
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