改正:
Scientists report no human deaths due to excessive caffeine consumption, although caffeine does cause convulsions and death in certain animals.
2. Sentence sprawl
Too many equally weighted phrases and clauses produce tiresome sentences.
过尤不及,虽然我们强调句子要有一定的复杂性,但是实际上老米教授、专家从来不主张过长的句子,读者也不爱看。不过,要达到精确而又不啰嗦的表达,的确是有难度的。
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Sentence sprawl
The hearing was planned for Monday, December 2, but not all of the witnesses could be available, so it was rescheduled for the following Friday, and then all the witnesses could attend.
改正:
The hearing, which had been planned for Monday, December 2, was rescheduled for the following Friday so that all witnesses would be able to attend.
3. Misplaced and dangling modifiers
Place modifiers near the words they describe; be sure the modified words actually appear in the sentence.
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Misplaced or Dangling Modifier
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