该篇文章基本切题,但思想表达不清楚,有很多严重的语言错误,属于5分档。
Sample 3
Some people think that they lack of opportunities, while others think that everyone will face to some ones. I agree to the latter.
In fact, we are living on the same world. Most of us must deal with a lot of things every day. Some peoples circumstances are even the same, so do the opportunities. However, why someone can grasp it but others cannot? All this depends on the careful observation and grasping the opportunity in time. For instance, we students in our college, whose circumstance are the same. We all should study a lot of courses before we graduate. But some of us study hard in order to learn more and well, while some dont. In the end, the hard-working students get the better jobs. At that time, there are some students who have been playing all the time will say that they lack of opportunities. As we know that the hard-working students make the best use of their time and they observe everything around them carefully, so that they can grasp the opportunities in time.
In a word, the opportunity is equal to everyday, and whether we can grasp it or not is critical.
该篇文章基本切题,有些地方表达不清,文字勉强连贯,但语言错误较多,其中有一些为严重错误。属于11分档。
Sample 4
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