Just sit back and relax, and enjoy the music.
She realized how tense she was and forced herself to relax.
What Robin needed was a good drink to relax herself.
很多学生喜欢在relax之后接myself/yourself, 但在英语中relax之后接反身代词的情况极为少见。常接的宾语是muscle, hold/grip, rules/controls/regulations, vigilance/concentration一类词。同样,第一段第四句to join up our Fun Club以及后面两段中的up也是多余的。加入某个团体或组织,用join即可,例如:
During the war, he joined the air force and became a pilot.
Join up常作参军解,但是不及物,后面不跟宾语,例如:
He joined up right after leaving school.
Join up作及物动词时,意为连接 ,例如:
You need to join up these two lines.
2. 第一段第四句中的you can make a wise choice不如改为you can make a wise decision 。 make a choice是在几个东西中挑一个,作一个选择,可这里没有提到别的选择,用choice就不合适了。
3. 第二段第二句的during the time you can sing and dance to music, 应该改为at which you can sing and dance to music ,或者干脆将这一句拆分为两句。英语中,主从复合句必须有连接词连接主句和从句,如果没有连接词,则各个子句是独立的,应该用句号分开。
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