4. 第二段第四句的we provide many books related your major courses应改为we provide many books related to your major courses。动词relate的搭配应为relate sth. to sth., 例如:
Most writing systems relate letters to sounds fairly closely.
Is Conni related to him?
Fox writes about how culture is related to art.
5. 第二段第七句中的you can practice yourself建议改为you can get lots of practice。 practice yourself这种说法在英语中见不到。
6. 第二段第八句中的you can make more new friends建议改为you can make many new friends 。这里没有明确的比较,还是不用比较级为好。
7. 第二段最后一句中的you can balance between work and study应改为you can balance study and entertainment或者you can balance study with entertainment, 也可以改为you can achieve a balance between study and entertainment。在两者之间取得平衡,用Balance A and/with B这个表达形式,或者用achieve/strike/keep/maintain a balance between A and B。另外,从内容方面看,俱乐部的活动内容是学习和娱乐,通篇没有提到工作,所以,在这里突然讲起工作和学习的平衡,有一点前后不连贯,改成between study and entertainment ,就要好得多。
学习英语最重要的是多读、多写,同时要观察英美人如何表达思想,如何搭配使用词语,体会每一个词的确切含义。读得多了,并用心去体会,慢慢就会找到感觉。
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