23.2 Comparison of Two Model Essays(两例范文的比较)
1)My Bad-Tempered Father
My father is easily angered by normal,everyday mistake.One day my father told me to wash the car and cut the grass.I did not hear exactly what he said,and so I asked him to repeat it.Then he went into a hysterical mood and shouted,Cant you hear?
Another time he asked my mother to go to the store and buy groceries with a fifty-dollar bill,and told her to spend no more than twenty dollars.She spent twenty-two dollars.As soon as he found out,he immediately grabbed the change from her and shouted that she was never to do any errands for him again.He did not speak to her for the rest of the day.
My father also gives my older brothers a hard time with his irritable moods.One day,he told them to be home from their dates by midnight;they came home at 12∶15.He informed them that they were grounded for three weeks.
To my father,making a simple mistake is like commiting a severe crime.
2)My Generous Grandfather
My grandfather is the most generous person I know.He has given up a life of his own in order to give his grandchildren everything they want.Not only has he given up many years of his life to raise his children properly,but he is now sacrificing many more years to his grandchildren.
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