亮点评析
如上句的believe一样,know也是非常初级的词汇,作文中出现I believe that,I know that这样的表达只能体现考生写作技巧的稚嫩,用It does not surprise us to discover that替换We know that并没有改变原句的含义,却使全句顿时增添了亮点。
7.Original: We all know that most factories would be of no use if there were not clean water supply.
Revised: It goes without saying that most factories would be of no use if there were not clean water supply.
亮点评析
同上例一样,know这样的初级词汇应避免在作文中使用,It goes without saying that是一个固定结构,意思是是不言而喻的,常在作文中用来引经据典或表明一个尽人皆知的道理,类似的表达还有:
An old saying goes that
Proverb goes that
It is universally acknowledged that
It is generally accepted that
8.Original: Some other people think that people should read extensively.
Revised: Another position says that people should read extensively.
亮点评析
同know,believe一样,think也应该尽量避免使用,修改后的句子中是用Another position says that代替think提出另一种观点,也可以用hold a point of view,hold the opinion这样的短语替换。
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